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I've Revised the dialogue for Honey Bounty vol 2

Posted by DarkPlot - December 20th, 2023


Just letting you guys know that I wasn't happy with a lot of the dialogue in my latest comic, so I've rewriten a lot of it.

Now reading the thing whole will give a better sense of coehesion and hopefully there's gonna be no awkward/weird lines here and there.

Let me know what you think of it.


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Its perfect

Glad you like it!